Talk:Olive Island (Viridian)

The phrase "In a glorious blockade" bothers me. Is it time to add a neutrality template?--Yaten 02:59, 7 Jul 2005 (UTC)
 * Or just edit the article to make it more neutral. I've done so before.  The neutrality template could be useful in the future though, I vote ya go ahead and add it. --Guppymomma 03:09, 7 Jul 2005 (UTC)

from the history author...
I still think that that was a great blockade. Sure MdM (my flag) lost the island, but, at least I, had fun in the process. Delete as you please, at least its something...
 * My stance was that the phrase "in a glorious blockade" could be interpreted as a non-neutral point of view. I don't think our edits to your history, which was a great addition, by the way, affect its meaning very much.  I think a more neutral phrase such as "In an exciting, closely contested blockade" is more appropriate, because it gets the meaning across without taking a particular point of view.--Yaten 05:50, 7 Jul 2005 (UTC)